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I really like this. It's got that choppiness from moving on 2s and 3s yet it doesn't really do too much snappiness. Instead relying on more realistic movement. Interesting style.
I like the first half but the choreography in the 2nd half feels slow and awkward.
My only issue is that the hit to Harley's stomach at 1:31 doesn't seem like it connects because of the difference in lighting between the two of them
start - 0:45.5: Nao Miyawaki
0:45.6 -1:20.8: Ping Luo